Puerto Rico

Posted by Rell

Below the state of Florida about 1,038 miles from Miami lies Puerto Rico. Among one the many places I want to go. On account of the beauty of it's shore it tops the rest. Beyond the shore it's scenery throughout the landscape. Outside the homes in the soil holds the roots of the trees within the leaves lies the frog known as the coqui. The sound of is heard from a distance away. As you get near them it gets louder. During the day brings the smells of the foods. Throughout the food so good amid the sense of adobo and sofrito

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5 Responses to "Puerto Rico"

  1. Ariana Says:
    January 29, 2010 at 11:12 AM

    This is very good. You were very descriptive.

  2. Unknown Says:
    January 29, 2010 at 11:18 AM

    It's very good, but seems unfinished. You should totally finish it.

  3. Bay Says:
    January 29, 2010 at 11:22 AM

    Good Job, but I agree with Cassie it seems unfinished!

  4. Mitch-EZ Says:
    January 29, 2010 at 11:35 AM

    I fully agree with cassie and what she has said. It is very interesting and I can picture it a little. It feels like there is more that you want to say. You should continue and write some more so it looks and sounds much better.

  5. Swanson Says:
    January 31, 2010 at 9:49 PM

    Try writing your entire description without mentioning the name of the place until the end. You have some grammar to repair.

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